Hello, I am Ang Jojo, and I will be doing a critique for you.
OH MY GOD!!! This sketch is so BEAUTIFUL and REAL!!!! the shading and the fur is amazing!!! the outline is perfect, the colouring / Shading is just as good! It's eye is also very well drawn! the presure of the shading show where the light is shining! It is just too good to be true!
It's nose looks so real too! I could already imagine touching it!!!
Though all that wonderful-ness, Maybe the lower part of the sketch, the body part, well, maybe you should outline it a little harder. But of course, maybe you did it on purpose to make the main area on the head, which is just fine